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篇一：MBA專業自我陳述
By serving as a noncommissioned officer in theUnited StatesMarine Corps, I learned and developed valuable leadership skills that would prove crucial to my success as a leader and to my ability to gain the respect of my subordinates. The Marine Corps places great emphasis on leadership characteristics, believing that great leaders are not born, they are properly trained. I submitted to grueling training on my way to becoming an officer in the Marines, and believe this training gives me the foundation of strong leadership skills that I will need in every day corporateAmerica.
Leadership in the Marine Corps is more complicated than the simple management of employees. I learned this lesson the hard way, being thrust into a management position as my unit was being shipped over seas during the Persian Gulf War. As a newly promoted Corporal, I was given the job of night crew supervisor in charge of 15 other marines. In the Marine Corps, leaders are not only held accountable for the work getting done but also for the performance and conduct of their marines. At the age of 21,I had the responsibility not only to carry out my orders but also to safeguard the personal lives and protect the general welfare of my men. This being my second time over seas, I understood many of the difficulties that a young marine can have on their first extended trip away from their family. I enjoyed helping my marines over come their problems, and learned that the benefits were well worth the time that I invested. I discovered that employees who have the support of their management tend to be more focused on the tasks at hand, gaining levels of trust and loyalty that can only benefit the organization.
Related to this issue of gaining trust and loyalty through management supportiveness is that the Marine Corps requires creative means to motivate subordinates. It can be very difficult at times to be in charge of individuals, yet have no direct control over their salaries or advancement in the organization. The government decides military salaries, and promotions are controlled by boards with the primary means of measurement being time in service. For this reason, I learned to manage through mutual respect. I believe it is much more important to gain the trust and confidence of your employees than to use direct compensation to motivate them.
Throughout my Marine Corps career and beyond I developed many strong leadership skills, but most of all I learned that to be effective as a manager one must remain focused on the human aspect of leadership. By concentrating too much on the goal and not on the people needed to meet it, leaders risk alienating their employees and thus failure in achieving the goal itself. By leveraging the lessons and qualities I gained while serving as an officer in the Marine Corps, I hope to meaningfully contribute to the academic environment at the Anderson School of Business.
點評：
本文是一篇表現了leadership skills的優秀文書，可以顯示出作者是一個具有管理能力和技巧的MBA候選人。
1.文章結構
文章只有四段不到500字的篇幅，可以分成總分總三個部分。第一部分總起說自己在海軍培養到了領導能力。第二部分就具體說自己得到的是什麼樣的領導能力。第三部分再次強調自己的領導能力，表達要進入安德森商學院學習的決心。
2.文章內容
文章一開頭就描述自己在海軍得到了寶貴的領導技巧。吸引讀者往下看究竟是何種技巧那么重要。在文章的第二部分，作者通過描述作為一名海軍軍官所肩負的責任，以及他怎么處理上司與下屬的管理關係的技巧，得出相互尊重，人性化是管理的訣竅。
3.總體評價
MBA文書向來要求簡潔凝練，觀點集中，這篇文書首先就滿足了這些要求。領導素質和技巧有很多，但是不可能在一篇文書里全部表現出來，因此就要選取一個別人不太可能有的素材來展現自己某方面的領導天賦。作者選取的素材是他在海軍作為一名軍官的經歷。在文中作者不是體現自己如何有能力帶兵打仗，而是把這段經歷提升到自己注重管理人性化，與下屬相互尊重，從而可以達到良好的管理效果。
4.可借鑑因素
文章可借鑑之處就是簡潔明了，主題明確，選取的素材並不是常人可以經歷到的，還有就是從不平凡的經歷當中提煉出一種獨特的觀點。本文中作者得出的管理之中注重管理之中的人性因素，相互尊重比用獎金激勵員工更加具有效果的觀點就是比較獨特，常人不是很容易想到的觀點。
譯文：
作為美國海軍的一名軍官，我學會並且培養了寶貴的領導技巧。因為這種技巧對於我成為一名成功的領導者，得到下屬的尊重來說是至關重要的。海軍對於領導特質的培養很重視，他們相信領導者不是天生的，而是經過恰當的訓練得到的。我歷盡磨練成長為海軍的一名軍官。我相信這樣的訓練培養了我的領導能力，而且這種能力在我以後每天的工作中都是需要的。
在海軍作為一名領導者比簡單的員工管理複雜得多了。我是經過艱苦的學習培養了自己的領導能力。海灣戰爭的時候我被委任到海軍的領導層。作為一名新提拔的下士，我的工作就是帶領一個15名成員的夜間行動部隊。在海軍里，領導者不僅僅要負責任務的完成，還要負責士兵的表現。在我21歲的時候，我肩負的責任不僅僅是執行任務，還有就是要確保下屬的生命安全和福利。這已經是我第二次出海了，我明白一個年輕士兵首次離開家鄉出海會遇到的許多困難。我很樂意去幫助下屬克服困難而且我也明白我的付出是有價值的。我發現那些支持管理者的員工會更加關注手頭的工作，對於公司的信任和忠誠也會得到加強。
與通過支持管理者而產生的信任及忠誠相關的就是海軍要求創新方法去激勵下屬。在一個公司管理員工是非常困難的，因為薪水和提拔都沒有統一直接的控制。而政府決定了部隊的薪水，提拔也是由委員會根據服務時間的長短來決定的。因為這個原因，我通過相互尊重來管理。我相信去獲取年輕員工的信任和信心遠比通過獎金來激勵他們更為重要。
在我海軍生涯之中我培養了許多領導技巧，但是最為重要的是我學會了要做一名高效率的經理必須注重領導當中的人性化。假如領導者過於注重目標而忽視實現目標需要的員工，他們將會與員工漸行漸遠並最終達不到目標。我希望在海軍中作為一名軍官學到的領導技巧和平衡能力可以為安德森商學院的課堂作出應有的貢獻。
篇二：醫學專業自我陳述
Veterinary Background
Changing the bandage on an angry bulldog’s paw or trimming the hooves of a 2019-pound draft horse can be an intimidating venture. Curing animals requires compassion, precision, and confidence; it is also an excellent way to learn about practicing medicine and to feel the satisfaction of helping someone in need. Due to my rural background, knowledge of animals, and love of science, I began working for a local veterinarian at a young age. Later in life, when I decided to become a physician, I saw that my veterinary experiences had prepared me well for a career in health care.
When I started volunteering in an emergency room, I learned that humans really aren't so different from other animals -- I needed to show my compassion in order to earn their trust before I could heal or comfort them. When a child or widow brought me their dying pet and pleaded for me to cure it, I had to soothe the person as well as the animal. I used this calm compassion in the emergency room when comforting the family of a father who had just suffered a heart attack, or when talking with a husband frantic about his wife’s car accident. I saw further similarities between human and animal medicine when I shadowed Dr. Harry Williams in his family practice. I saw that his close relationship with his patients led him to keep thinking of them long after his office closed for the day. Likewise, as a veterinary technician, I had often carefully considered how to help each animal. Compassion is truly a prerequisite for any career in health care.
In my work with animals, I learned that perseverance is key to successful treatment. Interruption of that treatment can lead to disastrous results. In many rural communities near my home, I witnessed the consequences of the absence of consistent medical care. As a farrier, I have worked in many old-order Mennonite communities whose needs aren’t being met: when one client's daughter injured her hand in a corn sheller, she was unable to get medical care because facilities were far away and no doctors could come to their farm. The girl’s hand was infected and not healing well. I did what I could, but I was troubled that I didn’t have the expertise to treat the injury. On my next visit, I saw that her hand had grown deformed. Had she been able to see a physician more frequently, her hand might have healed correctly. Encounters of this kind have revealed to me the consequences of medically underserved communities. I look forward to working toward a solution to this problem when I am a physician.
A good veterinarian operates with precision. I have applied the careful, exacting skills I learned with animals to my lab work. I am currently involved in research on corneal endothelium with Dr. Carson Kennedy. In the lab, we study mammalian corneal cells; eventually, we would like to describe and prevent ophthalmic diseases such as glaucoma. Through this work, I have honed my scientific skills and sharpened my analytical mind. It is exhilarating to catch a glimpse of valuable knowledge, not yet known by anyone, which has the potential to help many people. It is also very rewarding to know that I have contributed to the advancement of medicine by providing research results that will improve people’s health.
Perhaps the most important quality required to practice human or animal medicine is confidence. In the lab, in the emergency room, and in the field, I have had many opportunities to observe the importance of confident leadership to a medical practice. Over the years, I have observed that the best veterinarians and physicians handle each issue swiftly and appropriately, delegating tasks to others with self-assurance. In every medical situation, someone must take the lead role while working to manage the team. Leadership roles have always come naturally to me -- I spent twelve years working toward becoming an Eagle Scout and helping my younger brother to do the same. The composure I gained as a troop leader helped me to excel in my role as supervisor at a large walking horse farm. Since then, I have grown into leadership roles that required more significant responsibilities. I am comfortable as a leader because I am confident in my ability to ensure the health and safety of others. The leadership skills I have developed will be a vital part of my work as a physician.
When I began working as a veterinary technician, I did not fully realize that the skills I gained would be so applicable to my eventual career as a physician. Yet my experiences with animals have provided me with an excellent foundation to continue my studies of human health and well-being. I am eager to develop the medical knowledge I have gained thus far in order to become the kind of physician my community will be able to rely on.
結構解析：
這是一篇申請醫學的文章是很成功的。說實話我是很喜歡的。
我們看一下這篇文章的結構：
第一部分，開頭。
在這部分開門見山的點中了題目，獸醫的經歷。
第二部分，延伸引入。
光看了開頭讓人很迷惑，怎么獸醫的來申請醫學了呢。所以這裡解釋引入一下，告訴別人，我之前的經歷和和現在的申請有關係的。
第三部分，主體。
這裡主要是在講自己的醫學上的經歷，跟老師做實驗也好，還是之前的社會活動，結合這些事情來說自己在醫學上的認識，非常的真實也令人信服。而且作者的邏輯性很強，由潛到深的敘述，一切都顯得那么自然。雖然很多東西都是專業的東西，但是結合他所說的東西並不顯得枯燥。
第四部分，升華。
通過對主體部分的總結，寫出了自己對專業的一些看法，領導能力對於外科醫生非常重要。並且詳細的寫出了自己的觀點。
第五部分，結尾
在升華的基礎上，點名了自己的目的，說出了自己的目標。
點評：
可以說這篇文章的格式是相當的標準的，一共是6段，分為很標準的5個部分。結構清晰，讓人可以很清晰的知道作者要表達的思想和內容。不像很多作者在做文章的時候太散太亂。這篇文章中我最喜歡的就是這點。而且這篇文章的中心很明確，並且用獸醫的經歷把整個文章串了起來。可以說獸醫的經歷就好像是一根繩子，牢牢的把各個部分有機的連線起來，讓人看到文章的時候第一個感覺就是整體感好。可以說，很多時候學生在做個人陳述的時候，都喜歡簡歷試的羅列，一個個人陳述洋洋灑灑的XX段，看得我頭都大了。並且都是一種純的羅列試描述，我做了什麼，通過多少時間得到了什麼結果，純的描述。沒有任何的邏輯思維，給人的一個感覺，就是亂。除了達到了簡歷的效果之外什麼都得不到。亂糟糟的，我看了都頭疼，你想想那些天天看材料看到要吐的評審委員會成員們會怎么看你的這個東西呢?我想這個就不用我來說了吧。
良好的文章結構代表了良好的邏輯思維能力。這個是毋庸置疑的，並且從我得到的一些信息來看，我至少是相信一點，就是評審委員會的人在看你文章的時候，同時也是在看你的邏輯思維能力，畢竟做科研的人，沒有一個良好的邏輯思維能力是不可能的。專業固然重要，但是我們要掌握怎么去表現我們的專業。簡歷有簡歷的用處，有它應該體現的點，PS有PS應該體現的點，如果你想把簡歷做成PS，如果你想把PS組成簡歷，這是什麼?前者，畫蛇添足;後者，照貓畫虎反類犬。都是四不像的東西，並且掩蓋住了我們本應該體現的點。這樣你真的就認為你的PS就是好的PS嗎?
好的PS不在於文章的形式，不在於內容怎么寫，不在於開頭怎么寫，沒有一個定式，沒有一個模板，沒有一個套路。但是核心是一樣的，體現我專業的深度，或能力。那么怎么把你的文章組織好，用一個很好的線串聯起來。邏輯思維的體現。切記簡歷試PS，你有沒有這樣的想法?有，必要改正。
篇三：臨床醫學專業自我陳述
Life
When a pod of 55 pilot whales recently beached themselves on a stretch of Cape Cod, vacationers and beach-goers came to the rescue. By high tide, they managed to save 46 whales. In explaining his motivation for jumping in to help, one volunteer simply answered, “Life.” The same purpose inspires my ambition to become a physician.
Medicine appeals to my deep appreciation for human life, inculcated by studying man as both a human being and biological machine. The decision to practice stems from a perpetual fascination with science combined with this basic love for life. I grew up capturing insects and watching PBS, always questioning the complexities of how the body works. Through academics and medical research, I have begun to answer this question.
My passion for knowledge of the inner workings of the human body led to proactive involvement in medical research, enriching my view of medicine as well as nurturing the desire to continue research endeavors throughout my medical career. For the past two years, I have studied the relationship between structural damage and preserved clinical function in multiple sclerosis patients through functional MRI, under the tutelage of Drs. Cranston and Mahoney. Although unsure how these two factors correlate, we hypothesize that a critical period exists when the brain undergoes reorganization. In a concurrent study, I am investigating the role of the pelvic veins in cryptogenic stroke, funded through a grant awarded by the American Heart Association. The objective is to determine, via MRV, whether the pelvic veins are the source of thrombolytic emboli in cryptogenic stroke patients who also harbor a patent foramen ovale. The results of these studies not only will contribute to the advancement of medicine, but may also hold therapeutic benefits for those afflicted with such neurological damage.
The rewards of medical research lie in its practical application, and there is no better place to observe the miracle of life than in the NICU. Each day, newborns struggle to survive, illustrating the inherent advancements and limitations of medicine. I have witnessed preemies, from 24 weeks of gestation and on, live and die. Exposure to patients revealed that people are much more than collections of cells and organs -- we all share the special gift of life. My role in helping to care for them abounded with both challenge and joy.
My first patient, Baby S, arrived nine weeks prematurely and spent the first month of life in the NICU. Due to the presence of an extrachromosomal fragment, he suffered slight mental retardation. His mother, who had the same condition, visited infrequently during his hospital stay. When she did, her visits were brief and inattentive. I grew quite fond of Baby S, often watching him snuggle into the blankets like a small burrito. Although his sky blue eyes moved in a spastic manner, they gave life to his somewhat immobile body. He rarely showed signs of discomfort, whether hungry or needing a change. I tried to give him the extra attention he lacked. At times, he rewarded my efforts to interact with a smile; other times, he gave me a dirty diaper.
Reflecting on my experiences, I realize that the practice of medicine entails more than remembering and dispensing scientific facts. It requires exercising both mind and heart, along with a genuine respect for life. Baby S and my other NICU patients instilled in me a sense of how precious life is, and I am certain that my current EMT training and planned medical mission to southeast Asia will reaffirm my conviction to improve the lives of others.
The career of a physician will allow me to balance an intellectual curiosity with my desire to help those in need. By helping man at his best and his worst, combining a passion for life with the pursuit of scientific knowledge, I can help heal and comfort others. I eagerly anticipate a vocation in which my patients fuel my search for knowledge, and that search embodies reciprocal benefits to my patients. When asked why I have chosen a medical career, I can confidently respond, “Life.”
點評：
這是一篇臨床醫學生的Essay，從文章的內容以及最後一段的宣言可以看出，作者想要申請的也是臨床醫學，並且立志當一名醫生。
1、主題思想：
對於一個醫生來說，什麼是最重要的呢?當然是最生命的重視，並且是發自內心的珍愛。因為作為一名好的醫生，最首要的是醫德，其次才是醫術。文章就是緊緊地抓住了這一點來寫的，動之以情，從一開始闡述自己當醫生的理由、到後來文章中所提到的在醫院的實習經歷，都可以看出，作者想要強調的首先是自己對於醫學事業的一份熱忱和對於生命的高度尊重。試問，這樣一份對於醫學的赤誠之心，有那位教授不會為之感動呢?
2、開場：
應該說，文章一開頭引用的一個實例是非常好的，因為對於那些被擱淺的鯨的拯救行動，完全是出於一種對於生命的尊重，並且每一個前去救助的人，都是出於自願的。這樣的精神可以說是一名醫生的最高道德標準，也是對於立志向要做一名醫生的來說最難能可貴的精神。
3、中段：
文中的一段實習經歷，對於一名智力低下的嬰兒的照顧，也很好地體現了這樣一種精神，那就是對於生命都有一種平等的尊重的態度。
總結：
從整篇文章來看，作者強調的並非是自己學術上的東西，而最主要的是對醫德、對於醫生這個職業的理解，這一層面上來重點來描述的，而這樣寫的好處也就是能打動人心。總的來說，由於醫學是一門比較特殊的學科，它結合了科學的謹慎態度與人文的關懷，還需要一份社會責任感，所以在臨床醫學的Essay總，除了冰冷的學術闡述和探討，也非常需要有人性的溫暖參與其中，這樣寫出來的效果會好很多。
譯文：
生命的意義
前不久，55頭巨頭鯨在位於科德角的一段海灘上擱淺了，周圍正在度假的人們以和行人都紛紛前去解救。 在漲潮的幫助下，他們得以解救了46頭巨頭鯨。別人問起，究竟出於什麼動機使得你們去解救這些鯨時，其中一個志願者簡單的回答道：“因為生命”。是的，同樣是因為這個原因，使我想要成為一個醫生。
對於生命的感激讓我對醫學產生了興趣，也促使我不僅學習人類的醫學也包括生物醫學。而這一切都是源於我對於生命的熱愛。過去我捕捉昆蟲並且觀察PBS，總是對於它們複雜的身體構造以及工作方式充滿了疑問，通過醫學的研究，我開始尋找答案。
對於人體內部結構運作方式的熱忱，使我全身心地投入了醫學研究中，在這期間豐富了我對於醫學的眼界，同時也更堅定了想要投身醫學從而不斷的作相關研究的決心。在過去的兩年中，我通過運用MRI，對大量肝硬化病人做了研究，學習了結構損傷以及臨床性防禦機構，在Cranston 教授以及 Mahoney 教授的指導下，儘管對於這兩個因素是如何關聯的還不清楚，但目前的猜測是大腦在危急時刻所進行的信息重組。在最近的研究中，我研究了在遭受不明原因的撞擊後骨盆腔靜脈會有所變化，研究所用的基金是來自美國心臟協會的資助。目的是用來研究，對於遭受過不明撞擊並且是卵圓孔未閉的患者來說，是否骨盆腔靜脈是造成溶血栓栓賽物的原因。這些研究的結果不僅對於醫學進步做出了貢獻，並且很大程度上使遭受此類神經性損傷的患者造福。
對醫學研究最好的回報就是能運用於實踐，再也沒有比在NICU更好的地方了，因而在這裡總能發現生命的奇蹟。每一天，都有不少的新生嬰兒必須努力掙扎著才得以生存下去，醫學既有其進步的一面也有其局限性。我曾經親眼看到孕育了24周的早產兒，出生然後死亡。也曾經向患者解釋道，其實人類只不過是細胞和器官的累積——生命是上天賜與我們的一份特別的禮物。作為我來說，在幫助和照顧這些患者的過程中，既充滿了挑戰也得到一種滿足感。
我的第一個病人，是個早產9個星期來到人間的嬰兒，叫S。他在出生的第一個月里是在NICU度過的。由於存在染色體的多餘片段，他有一些輕微的智力低下。他的母親，和他有同樣的病症因此很少在S住院期間來看望他。每次母親到來都很短暫和匆忙。而我漸漸開始喜歡上了S，經常去看望他，看他在小小的籃子裡努力掙扎著。儘管他天藍色眼睛的轉動和一般人不同，上天賜與他生命卻給於他不太靈活的身體。他很少表現出任何的不舒適，比如飢餓或者需要換姿勢。有時我會給於他更多的照顧，而他會給我一個微笑作為回報;當然，更多的時候，他給我的是一片髒尿布。
回顧我所經歷的一切，我意識到醫藥的實際套用不僅僅對科學原理的熟識以及運用，還有對精神上以及內心的歷練，以及對生命發自內心的尊重。嬰兒S以及我在NICU的其他病人，讓我漸漸明白了生命是多么的珍貴，而我現在也正在進行急診醫師的實習，並且，我打算去東南亞的決定也可以證明我想要救助更多人的這份決心。
職業醫師的職業讓我在對於知識的好奇以及對幫助別人的渴望之間找到一種平衡。在別人最好或最壞的狀態下幫助他們，並且抱著對於科學知識探索之情以及對生命的熱情，我想我能幫助極撫慰別人的能力。我渴望在與患者的相處的過程中，尋找真理，而在這探索的過程中，同時也反過來造福患者。每當別人問我為什麼選擇醫學作為一生的職業時，我會自信得回答：“因為生命”。
篇三：金融工程專業自我陳述
英文版：In my opinion, the Financial Engineering is a kind of creative technology to the Financial Instruments, Financial Means and system. It used to balance the benefits and venture as an interesting interdisciplinary subject. It covers many fields such as mathematics, computer science and finance, in which the mathematics and mathematical modeling are the two main aspects of the Financial Engineering. The Investment Portfolio Theory of Markowitz, the capital asset pricing model of the Sharp, Option Pricing Model of Black-Scholes and “Binomial” model of Cox can best reflect the critical position of the two subjects.
I am glad to choose mathematics and applied mathematics. Three years’ study had deepened my understanding of them, especially of mathematical modeling. (It still occurs to me when I went to attend the class of XX department given by Professor Jiang qiyuan in Tsinghua University for the first time. “1 kilogram of flour added with 1 kilogram of stuffing can make 100 dumplings, but what if the stuffing is more than 1 kilogram?” He used a very simple, vivid and interesting example which aroused my interest and led me into the mathematical modeling world.
The first time I kissed the mathematical modeling was in the summer vacation of 2019, when I got a good opportunity to attend the mathematical modeling training organized by our school. Seasoned mathematics teachers told me what on earth the mathematical modeling is through some existing examples, in which the one about SARS impressed me most. In 2019, SARS broke out and shrouded rapidly to the whole world, which imperiled our economic development and people’s living. Therefore, study on its spreading regularity and building the mathematical modeling for predicting and controlling its extension had become the “Archimedes Heels” for all mathematicians… So, the Logistic regression has been carved in my memory. Two weeks’ training has presented me with a kind of passion and calm thinking much more than just those classical mathematical models. As the patron saint of our human-beings, the existence of Mathematics and mathematical modeling are maintaining our subsistence and development. Then, when SARS ran riot, when we are suffering from the pain of AIDS, what can I do as a mathematics and mathematical modeling lover who loves life so much?
Pocketed with this passion and thinking, I tasted to use mathematical modeling into practice and solve the practical problems by attending the National College Mathematical Modeling Contest with the other two schoolmates on behalf of our college. It required us to evaluate the water quality of Changjiang River according to the data, through which we had to analyze the water pollution in every region and predict the trend of it in the future. Finally we had to bring out the plan against it. It was really a challenge for us towards flood of data and estimations as long as 17 pages. We tried almost a whole day only to filter those data and take the evaluations into comprehensive account. Pulling down various models we had built before, we were so defeated that we wanted to give up many times. However, we finally found the satisfactory model thanks to our encouragement to each other which armed us with full strength to go further.We managed to evaluate the water quality by Composite index model, which could not only represent the evaluation factors, but also reflect the main impacts of the contaminations to the water pollution. We predicted the future water pollution through multiple linear regressions fitting and brought out the plan against it by building linear optimization model. Finally, we got the second prize in Beijing for our thesis. Three days’ and nights’ modeling experience had cooled our passion and gave us even more calm thinking instead. The creation of the mathematical modeling, along with the successful solution to the problems through it lied on the solid mathematics foundation, strong modeling ability, accumulation of the knowledge on different fields, unique creative ideas and creativity.
The experience from this contest further aroused my interest in mathematics. I began to pay more attention to its application as well as learning the theories. In addition, I tried to catch every opportunity to take part in the practical mathematical modeling. My efforts finally rewarded when I was in the first term as a junior. I had a chance to participate in the 3-day electrician mathematical modeling practice-----classifying the sports programs for a big sports meeting. Being familiar with the Graph Theory, I immediately found the way to solve the problems by seeking the best Hamilton circuit line. Facing the nearly 8.7 billion data files with different orders much more than that on the National Mathematical Modeling Contest, I spent a long time on Algorithm without any perfect result. I wasn’t defeated towards this case, but so excited instead that I could have such a chance to challenge and improve myself. Looking up dozens of files, I finally made a perfect end of the practice by using the Genetic Algorithm into full account. It needs both a successful model and an effective arithmetic to solve these problems. , which largely shortened the operation time and improved the operation result. I learnt a lot from this practice. I came to know that to build successful mathematics modeling that can effectively solve the practical problems, we must take the operation cost
Summarizing my failures in the mathematical modeling electrician practice and proceeding from my interest in this field, I began to think of collaborating on the “Mathematical Modeling Saloon” with several students from mathematics and computer departments, taking the Computer Algorithms and mathematical modeling as the two themes of the book. Every Tuesday afternoon, we would organized those students interested in this field to study and exchange the ideas and arithmetic by imparting experience, sharing what we learnt, pondering together and discussing with each other. Both the traditional transportation & storage problems and the modern Stimulated Annealing Arithmetic (SAA), Ant Algorithm have ever been the topic of our discussion, from which I have learnt many thinking styles and methods to the problems from the students both in mathematics and computer department. So far, I am excited to see that this activity is still in the wind with more and more participants and it aroused a learning upsurge in our college.
Recommended by my teacher, I have participated in the Teaching Reform Program of Mrs. Xing yongli----the results analysis of “Improving the mathematics teaching quality on class”. Mrs. Xing, along with some other mathematics teachers experienced the class mutual activities in 2019 to 2019 with the character data files in form of paper investigations. For this style of data files, I finally used the Analytic Hierarchy Process (AHP) as a creative challenge instead of the fuzzy mathematical quantitative analysis models, which firstly knocked my mind. By quantitating data and using the AHP, I succeeded in analyzing how the overall quality of the teachers and their teaching skills work in improving the mathematics teaching quality on class, from which we got the conclusion that the teaching skills and the way to put forward questions on class play the most important role in the class mutual activities. Besides, Mrs. Xing collaborated with me on the thesis named “The Application of Analytic Hierarchy Processinto the Evaluation of Class Mutual Activities”. Both of us were satisfied with this thesis and contributed it to many presses to be published.
Similar with the mathematical modeling, the soul of the Financial Engineering is also the creativity. Therefore, the perfect application of the mathematics and mathematical modeling into the Financial Engineering once more surged my enthusiasm in this field. Furthermore, the Financial Engineering plays the important part in people’s living, social stability and the national development, which is my original intention to choose this field I think.
中文翻譯：在我看來金融工程是一種創新、創造技術，一種對金融工具、金融手段和系統的創造和創新技術，一種平衡收益和風險的技術.它包含了數學,計算機,金融方面的知識,是一門充滿了趣味的交叉學科,而數學知識和數學模型是這個學科中必不可少的核心內容：馬科維茨的投資組合選擇理論，夏普的資本資產定價模型，Black-Scholes的期權定價模型以及考克斯等人的“二項式”模型正是這種核心地位的體現。
我有幸選擇了數學與套用數學這個專業，在三年和它的接觸了解中，使我對數學，尤其對數學建模有了較深的理解和體會。(記得第一次去聽清華大學XX系姜啟源教授的講座,他在講座上舉了一個“現實生活中的數學”例子：“1公斤面, 1公斤餡, 包100個餃子;若餡比 1公斤多, 應多包幾個, 還是少包幾個呢? ” 是這個生動、形象、富於生活氣息的包餃子問題把我領進了數學建模的世界。)
第一次和數學建模親密接觸是在2024年的暑假，我有幸參加了學校組織的數學建模培訓。經驗豐富的數學老師們通過實實在在的例子告訴我們什麼是數學建模。給我印象最深的是一個關於SARS的例子：2024年，SARS爆發並在世界範圍內傳播，嚴重影響到我國經濟發展和人民生活，定量的研究SARS的傳播規律並建立數學模型預測和控制傳染病蔓延成為數學工作者必須解決的問題……於是Logistic回歸便成為我永恆的記憶。為期2周的數學建模培訓，給我留下的不僅是一個個經典的數學模型，更重要的是一份澎湃的激情和一份冷靜的思考：數學和數學建模是人類的守護神，因為有了她的存在，人類的生存和發展才有條不紊的繼續著;那么當SARS病毒肆無忌憚時，當AIDS病毒肆意侵蝕人們肉體時，一個熱愛數學、熱愛數學建模，更加熱愛生命的人能夠做些什麼?
懷著這份激情和思考，在大二的秋天，我第一次嘗試了運用數學建模的知識去解決實際問題，我和另外兩名隊員代表學校參加了全國大學生數學建模比賽。比賽要求結合數據對長江水質做出定量評價，分析各地區的水質污染;並對未來長江水質污染髮展趨勢做出預測分析，制定污水處理計畫。長達17頁的數據和多個評價指標對我們來說著實是個挑戰!究竟應該選擇哪些數據?怎樣綜合考慮多個指標?我們嘗試了近一天，推翻了以前建立的種種模型，有好幾次都被弄得想要放棄，是隊友間的相互鼓勵的力量和鍥而不捨的精神讓我們最終找到了自己滿意的模型：綜合指數法模型評價長江水質，既體現水質的各種評價因子，又能反映主要污染物對水質的突出作用;通過多元線性回歸擬合預測未來水質污染，建立線性最佳化模型，制定污水處理計畫。我們小組的參賽論文獲北京市二等獎。三天三夜的建模經歷，那份澎湃的激情已經漸漸平息，取而代之的是更加冷靜的思考：數學建模創造、創新，成功地解決問題依賴於紮實的數學基礎知識和過硬的數學建模能力;依賴於不拘一格的創新思維和創造能力;還依賴於對多方面知識的了解和積累。
參加數學建模比賽的經歷更加激發起我的學習興趣，使我在學習數學理論的同時更加注重它們的套用性。除此之外，我抓住一切可能的機會再次參加實際的數學建模。大三的上學期，我有幸參加了為期3天的電工數學建模實習：給某大型運動會比賽項目排序。由於對圖論知識很熟悉，我很快將問題轉化為尋找最佳Hamilton迴路。接近87億種不同的排序的數據量，比上次的全國數模競賽更大，我的算法運行時間相當長而且運行的結果也很不理想。這種情況的發生不僅僅沒有打消我的積極性,反而使我的情緒高漲,這是人生中難得的自我考驗,自我提高的機會!通過查詢資料改用遺傳算法，運行時間和結果都大大提高.最後成功地完成這次實習.這次實習給我的感觸很大，一個數學模型是否能夠完美地解決實際問題還要考慮其運算成本，實際問題不僅需要一個成功的模型還需要一個快速有效的算法。
電工數模實習結束後，濃厚的學習興趣和電工數學實習的教訓促使我和數學系、計算機系幾名同學共同籌劃並創建“數學建模沙龍”，將計算機算法和數學模型共同作為沙龍的主題。每周二下午，我們會組織有興趣的同學一起，以傳授經驗、分享心得、共同思考、共同討論的方法學習和交流數學思想和算法。傳統的運輸問題、儲存問題和新興的模擬退火算法、螞蟻算法都曾成為我們的討論話題。通過這個活動我從數學系和計算機系的同學身上分享了更多的知識,他們的思維方式,處理問題的方法!到目前為止這個活動仍然在進行著,參加的人數也越來越多.帶動了學校的一個學習熱潮,我為此感到非常的興奮!
在老師的推薦下，大三暑假，我參加了邢永麗老師的教學改革項目——“提高數學課堂教學質量”的結果分析。04-2024年，邢老師在她和其他幾個數學老師的任課班級上做了課堂互動的教學實踐，其數據大多以調查問卷等文字形式出現。此模型的特點讓我馬上聯想到模糊數學定量分析模型，但敢於嘗試新模型的念頭讓我最後選擇了AHP層次分析法。通過量化數據，套用AHP層次分析法定量分析老師的綜合素質、授課技巧等因素在師生互動、提高數學課堂教學質量中所起的作用，得出教師的授課技巧和課堂問題設定在課堂互動中所占分量最重的結論，並和邢老師合作完成《層次分析法在課堂互動教學效果評價中的套用》論文，邢老師和我對論文都非常滿意，已向多個期刊投稿並有望發表。
和數學建模一樣，金融工程的靈魂是創新思維和創造能力，而數學和數學建模知識在金融工程的套用更讓我對這門學科充滿了興趣;更s重要的是，金融工程技術能給人們的生活、社會的穩定、國家的發展做出重要貢獻，我想這個也更加符合我學習數學建模的初衷。
篇四：計算機專業自我陳述
英文版：I thought much before I began to write the PS. However, holding the pen, I suddenly felt wordless because I have too much to say, too much to write. Standing on the crossroad of life, I determined to study abroad without any hesitations.
It was not the desire for the life overseas, but the pursuit of my professional study that aroused my idea to study abroad. I was longing for the further study and embedded understanding of the essence of Information Science, tasting its charm. Pocketing this interest, I came into the department of Beijing Forestry University. Through several years’ study there, I gradually realized that the modern information society needed not only the professional talents in information science, but also the embedded researches in this field in order to use it into every enterprise. Meanwhile, it is certain that the information science is just the developing trend in the future, which could historically change the ever familiar life style. Therefore, in the process of learning, I can taste its interest and challenge, with which I can keep abreast with the latest technology. Furthermore, I think it was valuable for me to contribute my youth into the Information Science, the most prospective enterprise in the future.
My ordinary score on my school report will tell you that I am not good at examinations. Those so-called “examination skills” are also strange to me. Instead, I emphasize the practical operations and the real needs of the society, expecting to learn the knowledge and technology that stands at the top of the period. Therefore, I got the latest knowledge mainly by reading large amount of English books and browsing the websites. Besides, I participated in many practical activities, in which I could use what I have learnt into practice.
In my sophomore year, just as other schoolmates were submerging themselves into the fairy world of PC games, I began my part time working experience by working as a technician on the website of a small company. Just at that exciting time, I found that it was very difficult to use the theories I learnt on class into the practical work. Trapped in the gap between the school and society, I collected and summarized much practical professional files from a series of websites and learnt the HTML language and the CSS design by myself. From the first attempt in the society, I realized that I got much from difficulties rather than smooth work. On designing the information part of the website, I could not find the perfect combination between the files. However, as a hard-nosed boy, I was not defeated by the difficulties, but very excited towards them. By classifying and summarizing the files I found on the websites, I finally solved the problem.
Taking advantage of my insistent efforts, I was finally kissed by an opportunity to participate in a developing project, in which I worked as a core assistant of my teacher to develop the Iptables module under Linux. From a theoretical point of view, the development of the module could be included in the basic theories of the operating system. However, it was another challenge for me because I was not familiar with the programming of system module. Finally, I found the related knowledge on a book named “Module Programming”. Thanks to my repeated attempts, times of failures, at last, presented me with the final success. Through this practice, I believe firmly that failure is the access to the success.
I had a dream when I was just a kid----becoming a member in Chinese Academy of Science, the pioneer of the science and technology in China. My senior year witnessed me to achieve my dream. Under the recommendation of my teacher, I got the opportunity to work with the professors in automation department of CAS on developing the interface based on the biometric authentication technology. Two weeks was a short time, but a harvest time for me. Through the exchange with the experts and professors and looking up large amount of books and related literatures in the library, my understanding on all the specifies BIOAPI interface, the design of the 類 and data structure and the biometric interfaces had largely deepened. Seeing the final success, the sweetest smile in the world blossomed on my face.
My assiduity in study and careful working attitude won the appreciation of the professors in CAS. Therefore, at the last period of my undergraduate study, I was recommended by them to complete my graduation design by participating in a graduate subject of Chinese Blog Search Engine.
As the assistant, I completed the access and storage of the Blog data by using C language and Perl database. With the help of my studying fellows, I finally designed a frame of the Blog Search Engine and learn many new technologies.
After graduation, I accepted the offer of working on Sina website, where I was mainly responsible for the batch installation of operating system, tailor of the software package, the safety configuration, the smooth running of the equipments on line, the test and recovery of various hardware failures. Meanwhile, I was in charge of the immediate response and disposal of the accidents and the exact maintenance of thousands of servers in the whole company.
As a system engineer in Sina website, there are a lot of things to do in the application process, operating system and network as well as in the hardware. We generally solve the problems by our own practical experience combining with the related professional literatures and the knowledge we have learnt.
Years of working experience made me realized clearly that it has still a long way to go to achieve my dream---becoming an expert in this field. I have to step out of the “flowers” coating me now for my achievements to the further study for the next station on the way of life. Therefore, I need a nutritious academic atmosphere.
It was my curiosity that pushed me onto the road of learning new technologies and it was my strong learning ability and capability that presented me with the current achievement. I believe that standing at the cross road of life after a few years further study, I will be more confident and stronger expectative for my future.
中文翻譯：在我考慮寫這篇PS的時候我想到了很多,但在我準備動手寫的時候確感覺無從入手,並不是想不出什麼,而是我覺得我有太多的話要說,太多的事情要寫了.當我即將面臨人生的一個新的十字路口,我沒有像別人那樣猶豫不決,繼續工作,考研,留學,我的目標只有一個-出國求學!
出國留學的想法並不是源於我對國外生活的嚮往,而是源於我對專業的追求,因為我對我所學習的專業具有的與眾不同的興趣.我嚮往著再能夠更加深入的學習和掌握信息科學的內涵,體會她的魅力!憑藉著一種懵懂的感性指引將我帶進了信息科學的殿堂，在大學幾年的學習過程中,逐漸認識到了當前的信息社會，不僅需要一系列方方面面懂得信息技術的人才，更需要我們對信息科學和技術做更深入的研究，將這個學科的技術套用到各個行業。而且，信息科學很明顯是未來的趨勢，它將顛覆性地 改變人們過去曾經熟悉的生活方式。在對這個專業的學習過程中，我感到了它的有趣、挑戰、永遠與最新技術保持同步，最重要的是讓我覺得它非常有前景，為了她揮灑自己的青春是值得的。
從我的成績單上不難看出,在大學階段，我專業課程的成績屬於一般。我並不擅長考試,更不懂得考試中所謂的技巧,我更看重實踐操作和社會的真實需求.我期望學到了解到的是能夠代表這個時代的知識和技術.當時我主要通過閱讀和自學一些原版的專業書籍教程來獲取最前沿的知識，通過瀏覽網上的科技動態和專業論壇來獲得第一手信息，以及拓寬自己的視野。再就是積極參與知識的實際利用和驗證。
大二的時候當我的同學還沉浸在網路遊戲的迷幻世界裡的時候,我利用業餘時間給一家小公司的網站做兼職的技術員,。可當時從學校學到掌握的知識很難用於實際工作,於是我蒐集整理了一系列網站維護方面的專業資料。後來通過自學我掌握了HTML語言和CSS設計.從這第一次嘗試的經歷我獲得了很多的收穫,但我認為最大的收穫就是這個過程中我遇到的難題.在製作網站信息板塊的過程中資料的吻合程度一直無法解決,我的倔強的性格讓我在困難面前越來越興奮.我利用所有可以利用的時間上網查資料,最終通過細緻的分類和鑑別，將它們有效的整理了出來。
通過我不懈的努力我在專業技術水平得到了老師的認可,終於通過一次偶然的機會我得到了一個參與開發項目的機會,並作為技術骨幹協助老師進行linux下iptables的模組開發。從理論的角度來看這個模組開發可以算做作業系統理論,而我對編寫系統模組並不是很熟悉,這又是一次挑戰.我在一本介紹module programming的書里找到了關於編寫系統模組的信息, 憑藉我大膽的嘗試,雖然失敗了幾次,但最終成功的實現了項目的最終目標,順利的完成了! 失敗是成功之母,我一直堅信這一點!
中國科學院是引領中國科學技術發展的先鋒,從小我就渴望著有一天能成為其中的一員!大四的那個夏天我實現了我的這個夢想!通過老師的推薦我協助中科院自動化所的老師們開發一個基於生物特徵認證的接口,雖然只有短短的兩個星期,但我從中受益匪淺. 通過與實驗室專家教授的溝通, 以及在圖書館裡查閱相關文獻,我將整個BIOAPI的接口規範,類和數據結構的設計,以及對生物接口的理念進行了深入了解。最終利用C++編寫除了初步的與該實驗室套用上的接口.成功後的喜悅不言而喻.
我刻苦學習,認真的工作態度得到了中科院老師的欣賞,當我在本科的最後階段我被中科院的老師推薦到他們的軟體所中文信息實驗室進行畢業設計.我參與的是一個研究生的課題，中文部落格搜尋引擎。、
做為assistant. 在這個過程中我完成了對blog數據的抓取和存儲，採用的有C語言，perl語言，mysql資料庫。通過自學和向師兄請教又學到了很多的新技術和知識,最終完成了一個部落格搜尋引擎的框架。
當我完成了大學的學習後,我接受了新浪網工作的OFFER。在這裡我主要負責作業系統的批量安裝、軟體包定製以及安全配置，以及線上設備的正常運行，各種軟硬體故障的檢測和恢復。同時負責各種突發事件的回響與及時處理。還負責將整個公司數千台伺服器和網路設備等的配置信息進行精確維護。
在新浪做為系統工程師.在這裡做的事情很多.有應用程式方面的、作業系統方面的、網路方面的，還有各種硬體方面的.採用的技術和理論也涉及以上各類.平時遇到的技術問題主要是通過自己的判斷思考和實踐，結合其他專業文獻以及自己所學的專業知識加以解決。
幾年的工作經歷給我最大的感受就是我清醒的認識到自己的不足,我現在的水平舉例我的目標-成為專業領域的專家,相距甚遠.我不能在坐在自己的成績上幻想了,我要超越我自己,在技術方面我有著太多的缺陷需要彌補,我相信我現在需要深入細緻的學習研究和找到一個良好的學術氛圍。
好奇心是學習新技術的必要條件，我具備這一條件。其次是善於鑽研，善於自學，動手能力強。這些在我上學過程中和工作以後更是得到了充分的鍛鍊。我相信幾年後當我站在下一個人生的十字路口的時候我將更自信.我對未來充滿了期待!
篇五：航空機械工程專業自我陳述
Countless dreamers have looked to the sky, their thoughts fixed on flying. The Wright brothers’ powered flight initiated men into a realization of that dream. I, too, found myself with a very personal and enthusiastic dream of flying as a boy. As a participant in a model plane tournament in elementary school, I found the joy of making a model plane and tinkering with it to find the perfect form. This boyhood pastime fostered my decision to major in aeronautical and mechanical engineering in one of the best engineering schools in Korea, Hankuk Aviation University.
點評：第一段通過描述作者小時候製作飛機模型和參加比賽的經歷，體現了他小時候的夢想，和興趣的產生。並引用懷特兄弟說明了自己決心的堅定。從而引出了自己今後的目標，和追求目標考上航空機械工程學院的經歷。這個開篇雖然比較大眾，但是表達出了自己的興趣和目標，並起到了引出下文的作用。
There I embraced numerous opportunities, encountering real aircraft and delving into introductory flight theory. From basic mechanics of aircraft to simple airplane design, the more I learned about my major, the more I wanted to learn. A natural extension of this burning curiosity remains to enter your renowned graduate program in the Department of Aerospace Engineering.
點評：第二段是一個過渡段，簡單介紹了在航空學院可以接觸到的東西，這些專業的知識使自己的興趣更加濃烈，促使自己更加全身心投入到這個領域的學習。很好的起到承上啟下的作用。
My preparation for your program has been expansive and thorough. First, I have a solid background in aeronautical and mechanical engineering. Additionally, during my undergraduate years, I joined a club called Information Process Research (IPR) focused on computer programming. Our projects dealt with visual C++, AutoCAD, and other software tools. My work outside the classroom, in job placements through Hankuk Aviation University, granted me excellent opportunities for real-world experience. This led to my associate membership of the Korea Aeronautical Engineers’ Association.
點評：這段簡單描述了自己在本科期間參與的一個項目，介紹了自己專業的背景。通過這個項目的介紹，反映出了作者本科期間參與的活動，證明了他由於興趣，開始研究和探索的過程，和為了追求目標所做的努力，同時也反映出了專業能力和背景。
While exploring the possibility of graduate-level work, I discovered that my interests are perfectly matched with your program. My interest in flight mechanics and control, especially, was piqued during my flight control and automatic control systems class. The aspects of the control system fascinated me and made me long to supervise a large project in this field one day. Although I realize my current limitations, my whole-hearted enthusiasm, combined with guidance from your exceptional faculty, will carry me through the rigors of studying and forge me into an expert control systems engineer after the two year M.S. coursework and the subsequent Ph.D. courses.
點評：本段寫通過作者不斷學習，確立了自己今後的學習方向和目標，並且把自己的興趣很好的與申請學校相結合，同時反映了自己本學校在這方面的劣勢。反映出自己迫切想要到對方學校學習的渴望。
Upon graduation from your school, I plan to work as a practical engineer in a large manufacturing company or as a researcher at an institute. Participating in the development of advanced airplanes, space shuttles, and satellites would fulfill my aspirations. In the long term, I would like to become a professor in order to share my knowledge and experience and instruct the next generation of aeronautical engineers.
點評：最後一段作者描寫了自己從這個學校畢業後，可以取得的成績和職業規劃。使學校可以看出學校的教育可以給他提供的幫助。同時反映出了作者明確的學習目標，和動機。
整體點評
大綱：本文分成四大部分
第一部分描寫作者小時候的夢想和追求夢想的過程，在敘述經歷中，體現出了自己的興趣產生和確定自己航空事業的目標。
第二部分描寫作者進入航空航天大學學習專業知識的經歷，通過專業學校的學習和研究項目的實踐，使自己確立的今後的學習方向和職業發展道路。
第三部分，作者描寫找到了自己今後打算學習的方向，但是自己學校在本領域的教學研究並不強，而對方學校在這方面是很有優勢的，反映出自己迫切想要去那裡學習的渴望。
第四部分，作者大膽展現了自己通過在那裡學習後，可以在職業上的發展和目標，更加證明了學校可以給作者的幫助。
主題內容：
文章以時間為線索，以一個孩子童年的夢想為主線，描寫了作者從小製作模擬飛機，到長大後學習航空方面知識的經歷，展現了作者小時候在模擬飛機上的成功對自己今後學習和職業發展的影響。以及進入專業學校通過不斷的學習積累，取得的良好成績的經過，對航空事業和自我認識及理想的追求。
素材取材：
文章素材的選取是以時間為線索，全部選用的是作者在航空方面學習，參加比賽和教學的親身經歷。題材生動，不但可以通過選材了解自己的專業背景，而且可以通過文章了解作者的成長曆程和對航空事業的追求過程。
立意：
文章從成長的角度描寫，專業背景是隨著自己成長的一步一步深入過程。隨著年齡的增長，對航空知識的積累和各種設備的學習，使作者對飛機及航空的興趣逐漸的濃厚，乃至把自己的職業目標也確立在航空事業上。
可以借鑑的：
這篇文章語言簡練，而且主體表達明確，表達出了一個孩子的夢想和追求夢想的過程，結尾處還大膽的構想了一下畢業的職業目標和規劃，體現出了這所學校對自己的幫助和作用，目標和動機明確。把PS中需要體現的興趣、學習過程、獲獎經歷、職業經歷、對自身和今後發展的認識、出國學習的目的都表達出來了。並且充分體現了自己的優勢，整體結構合理，過渡自然，主體突出。雖然文章的整體結構比較普通，但是選材真實，有說服力，今後可以借鑑。
譯文：
大多數的夢想家都嚮往天空，他們的想法固定在飛行上面。懷特兄弟通過裝有動力的飛行器開始實現了人們的夢想。我，也一樣有我自己獨立和熱情的想法，要像男孩子一樣飛行。在國小參加了飛機模型的比賽。在製作模型和對模型進行修補工作中我找到了興趣。少年時代的娛樂活動更加鼓勵我來到韓國最好的工程學校之一，HANKUK 飛行大學，學習航空機械工程學這個專業。
在那裡我獲得了許多機會，接觸到了真實的航行器並且鑽研了航空理論。從最基礎的航行器機械學到簡單的飛機設計，學得越多，我就越喜歡學。不斷燃燒的強烈的好奇心促使我要進入到您的航空航天工程部門的項目中學習。
為了進入到這個項目我做了非常廣泛和徹底的準備。首先，我有非常紮實的背景在航空機械工程學。而且，在我本科學習期間，我加入到一個被稱為信息處理研究的俱樂部(IPR)專注於電腦程式設計。我們項目處理一些視覺C++語言，AUTO CAD，和一些軟體工具。我的工作在教室之外，是在穿過HANKUK 飛行大學的一個工作地點，可以證明我得到了優秀的真實的工作機會。這個事情使我成為了韓國航空學工程系的成員。
當我在做本科水平工作的探測時，我發現我的興趣和你們的項目非常相配。我的興趣是飛行機械學和控制，特別另我不滿意的是我的飛行控制學和自動控制系統課程。我沉迷於控制系統的方面的問題，使得我渴望成為這一領域大型項目的管理人員。雖然我了解到我現在的局限性，我所有的狂熱再加上您學校對我的才能指導，將帶領我通過嚴格的學習並且在兩年之後進入到靈活的控制系統工程裡面，並且進行之後的PHD課程。
在從您學校畢業之後，我打算在一家大型的製造公司做實習工程師或者在學院裡面做研究員。對於類似高級飛機的發展，空間課程的發展和人造衛星的發展，都可以實現我的渴望。在長時間的學習中，我希望可以成為教授來分享我的知識，經驗來指導新一代的航空機械工程師。