【範文一】
There are many sports stars in the world. Do you know which is my favourite sport star? My favourite star is Yi Jianlian.
Yi Jianlian is a good basketballer. He is born in Heshan, Guangdong. He is 2.12 meters tall and 113 kilos. He is taller than many people, and he is hangsome and kind. He works hard in the match and in the training. So his coach and team friends all like him.
Yi Jianlian began his career quite early. When he was fifteen years old, he came into CBA. In 20xx, he got the first gold medal——Asia Youth championship’s champion. After that, he helped Guangdong team win 3 gold medals from 20xx to 20xx CBA championships. And he von the CBA MVP from 20xx to 20xx. In 20xx Asian Games, he got 16.6 points and 10.3 rebounds. He was the greatest basketball player in PRC, in 20xx, I think.
On June 28th, 20xx, Yi Jianlian came into NBA! All the Chinese people were excited. Because he is the fourth Chinese basketballer who came into NBA. All the people hope he can become better and better..
Yi Jianlian is good at playing basketball. And he is handsome, friendly, kind and so on. So he has a lot of basketball fans in the world. My mother and I are both his fans.
Yi Jianlian is my favourite star. I think, Yi Jianlian will be a famous basketball star in the world later. All the people on the earth will know him!
【譯文】
世界上有許多體育明星。你知道這是我最喜歡的體育明星嗎?我最喜歡的明星是易建聯。
易建聯是一個很好的籃球運動員。他是出生在鶴山,廣東。他是2.12米高,113公斤。他比很多人高,掛一些,更親切。他努力在比賽和訓練。所以他的教練和團隊的朋友們都很喜歡他。
易建聯很早就開始了他的職業生涯。當他十五歲時,他來到CBA。20xx年,他獲得了第一枚金牌——亞洲青年錦標賽的冠軍。廣東之後,他幫助球隊贏得三枚金牌從20xx年到20xx年CBA冠軍。從20xx年到20xx年,他馮CBA MVP。20xx年亞運會,他得到了16.6分和10.3個籃板。他是中國最偉大的籃球運動員,在20xx年,我想。
20xx年6月28日,易建聯來到NBA !所有的中國人都激動。因為他是第四進入NBA的中國籃球運動員。所有的人都希望他能變得越來越好。
易建聯很擅長打籃球。他很帥,友好,善良等等。所以他有很多的球迷。我的母親和我都是他的冬粉。
易建聯是我最喜歡的明星。我認為,易建聯將是一個世界上著名的籃球明星。地球上所有的人都知道他!