高中英語滿分作文及名師評析:自薦志願者

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假定你是李華,亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦,現正在招募志願者,你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內容應包括:1.個人情況:年齡,性別,學歷 2.個人條件:英語好,愛好體育,善於交際,樂於助人,熟悉本地情況 3.承諾:提供服務

注意:詞數100左右,開頭語已為你寫好;可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;生詞:申請—apply (v. ), application (n.),志願者—volunteer

Dear Sir / Madam:

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

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這篇文章寫得非常流暢,把握了所有要點,同時以“我”為中心,詳細說明了自己對志願者工作的結合,以此來表達自己的決心。由於用詞恰當,這種表現就比較充分,具備一定的說服力。辭彙和語句的運用也不錯。