Before and now優秀作文

Three years ago,I was thin and short.My hair was very long.I didn't like art before.And I couldn't ride my bike well.But,now enytings are different.Now I am tall ahd fat.My hair is very short than before.Now I like the art.Usually I draw some pictures on the weekend.Now I can go cycling.I also ride very well.

【參考譯文】

三年前，我又瘦又短。我的頭髮很長。我不喜歡藝術，我不能騎我的腳踏車。但是，現在就不同了。現在我長高了，胖了。我的頭髮比以前短，現在我喜歡藝術。我經常在周末畫一些畫。現在我可以去騎腳踏車，我也騎得很好。