英語作文：M best friend
M best friend is Zhang Xuang . She is clse friend.
She has gt a white face. Her face is as beautiful as a flwer. She has gt a pair f light and big ees. There is a sall and lvel nse in the iddle f her face. And there is a pin and sall uth under her nse.
She lies siling ver uch. When she is siling, （When she was siling,） her ees ls lie tw sall bat. She is gd at singing and dancing. But her favurite hbb is travelling. S a I. We have the sae hbb.（Our favurite hbb is s sae.）
Last ear, we went t Xi’an with ur parents. Xi’an is a beautiful cit. It has a heav and lng histr. There are lts f beautiful places. We plaed ver happ. In the evening, we watched TV、plaed cputer gaes (plaed n cputer )and read lts f interesting bs in the htel.
The next da (Trrw) we went t the st faus place—the Terractta Warrirs (the terractta warrirs.)
There were an peple visiting the Terractta Warrirs. The are fr different cuntries. such as the U, Aerica, apan, Russia……
(There are an peple visited the terractta warrirs. The were fr different cuntries. The are English、Aerican apanese、Russian……)
Zhang Xuang and I taled with the freigners ver friendl. ( Zhang Xuang and I taled t English and Aerican ver friendl.)And we t pictures with the. We had a gd and unfrgettable tie （in ）there.
When she is plaing with e, she is ver happ! S （a） d I.
This is best friend—Zhang Xuang. D u lie her?
翻譯：我的好朋友
我的好朋友是張徐洋,她是我的密友。她面龐白皙，就像一朵美麗的花朵。她有一雙明亮的大眼睛，一個小巧可愛的鼻子占據了臉蛋的正中央，在她的鼻子下面，有一張粉紅色的小嘴巴。
她十分愛笑，當她微笑的時候，她的眼睛就像兩隻彎彎的小船，她非常擅長於唱歌和跳舞。但是她最喜歡的愛好是旅遊。我也愛旅遊，我們的愛好是如此一致。
去年，我們一起去西安旅遊，西安是一個美麗的城市，它有一段厚重而悠久的歷史。這裡有許多美麗的景點。我們玩得很開心。在晚上，我們在賓館裡看電視、上網衝浪，還看了許多有趣的圖書。
第二天一大早，我們就去最著名的景點——兵馬俑參觀。
有許多人都來參觀兵馬俑，他們來自不同的國家。有英國人、美國人、日本人、俄羅斯人……
我和張徐洋與英國人與美國人進行了非常愉快的交談。我們還和他們合影留念。我們非常高興.當我們在一起玩的時候，她很開心，我也一樣。
這就是我的好朋友——張徐洋，你喜歡她嗎？
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