這封求職信中求職者首先搬出了自己的碩士導師，因為他是個知名人士，並且在信里附上他的推薦信。這些都是有效的求職辦法。另他還強調自己會2種外語且發表過論文，這種“自我標榜”在求職信里是很重要的。
director of consulting center
shanghai foreign service co., ltd
406 maoming mansion, 580 maoming rd(s)
luwan district, shanghai XX1
dear mr. director,
i am currently working on master degree in international commercial law at fu dan university. my supervisor mr. liu mingyu, a well-know professor of law, tells me that sfsc specializes in recommending qualified personnel to muti-national companies and suggests that i contact you for recommendation.
during the two years of studies at fu dan university, i have not only acquired a lot of knowledge of international commercial law, but learned two foreign languages as well -english and japanese. moreover, i have published two papers in the university journal on problems that may arise after china‘s entry to wto. and they have been favorably accepted.
i am enclosing a resume, copies of my published papers, and professor liu‘s letter of recommendation.
i sincerely hope you wil introduce me to a famous multi-national company, to which i will dedicate myself.
truly yours,
fu jialin