如何寫好英語求職信細節

四、關於求職信的結尾用語,下面也有三組例句。每一組裡面(1)句較差,經過修改後(2)句顯得比較恰當。a:(1)軟弱、羞澀的:ifyouthinkicanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,ishallbegladtotalkwithyou.(2)改寫後(較佳):ifmyqualificationsmeetyourstandards,iwouldbehappytospeakwithyouinperson.b:(1)懷疑,不妥、不安全的:ifyouareinterested,pleaseletmeknowimmediately,asi'msureaninterviewwillconvinceyoui'mthemanforthejob.

(2)改寫後:iwouldliketorequestaninterview.youcanreachmebytelephoneatbeijing123456betweenthehoursof7-9a.m.and5:30-9:30p.m.anyevening. 

c:(1)請求式的句子,不夠完整(遺漏面談時間):iwouldappreciatetheopportunityforaninterview.icanbereachedbycallingbeijing12345678.(2)改寫後:mayihavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterfurtherwithyou?mytelephonenumberisbeijing12345678.youcanreachmebetweennineandfiveo'clockduringtheday.