第三段六個句子, 第一個句子是下個結論,談解決問題的必要性.第二個句子是第一個建議談的是加強立法懲治這個現象,第三個句子談提高人們的覺悟關於著這個現象能提高人們對這個現象的覺悟.第四個句子談個諺語,談一下實踐我的建議的重要性.五個句子談解決的任重道遠.第六個句子是解決問題之後的美好的未來。
第一段
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主題 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主題 should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中間段落從兩方面論證問題的危害，並舉例論證，預測危害的趨勢
(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主題 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主題 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主題 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主題will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
最後一段要強調解決問題，談的兩點建議通常是提高人們的意識，加強執法
(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主題. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
積極有利型的文章
第一段談的是三個句子,第一,二個句子都是在描述圖畫,第三句子這個現象對社會發展的積極的現象,第四個句子是圖畫簡單,寓意深刻.
第二個段子,第一個句子談一個十二個單詞的爆發力的主題句,第二個句子談這個現象的永恆的社會含義,用一個三十五個單詞的鑽石級的排比句子,談只要有這個現象就可以讓我們不斷有意義的事情,征服挑戰和競爭,並最後走向成功.第三個可以從反面談如果沒有這個積極現象,人們生活就憂悶,有挫折感,無前進動力,前途渺茫.第四個句子談有兩個大的好處.第五個句子談第一個好處,通常是讓生活豐富,有效率.再談第二個好處通常是談一些個人發展或社會進步的好處.第五個句子是代替for example的五星級的句子.第六個是具體的舉例子,談根據一項調查表明,80%的人只要利用這個積極的現象就容易改變人生,提高素質.也可以單獨舉個性例子,第七個句子是倒裝句子談只有這個現象才能讓我們成為社會的成功者
第三個段子首句 談二十五個單詞的超豪華的句子,談無論做大事還是小事,無論做難事還是容易事,都要這個積極現象.第二個句子談有兩點建議讓它變的更好.第三個句子談讓它變的更好的第一個方法,通常發揮它的好處,避免壞處.第四個句子談第二個方法,第五個句子談個諺語,第六個談解決任務的任重道遠.第七個倒裝句談只要有這個積極現象就會享受一個美好,豐富和有活力的未來.
文章以團隊精神為例子
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫重點信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重複上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.