2024年上海虹口區高三一模英語作文範文

20xx年虹口區高三一模原題:

II. Guided writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你班將召開一次主題班會,探討高中生在成長過程中遇到的煩惱。請根據自己實際生活中遇到的學習、交友、代溝、同齡人攀比等現象進行思考,寫一篇發言稿。文章需包括:

1. 你在實際生活中遇到的至少兩種煩惱及其簡要介紹;

2. 你應對這些煩惱所採取的舉措和建議。

昂立高考名師程林華老師範文:

How to Tackle Troubles in High School

1It is natural that we, high school students, will meet a series of troubles both at school and at home. How to deal with these issues poses a challenge for us.

Surely, the troubles that individuals face differ. 2As far as I am concerned, the following two issues distract me most. 3To begin with, I encounter great pressure from study, because I always dream of entering the best university in Shanghai. 4In China, a country with such a large population, the competition for excellent universities is so fierce that almost all students have to work hard, even to burn the midnight oil, as I always do. Furthermore, 5it is the lack of in-depth communication with my parents that also bothers me a lot. 6Whenever talking to me, they only focus on the scores of examinations. 7What I want from them is simply encouragement and support, instead of enormous pressure.

8As for the above-mentioned troubles, on the one hand, I need to improve my study strategies, so as to be more efficient in study; on the other hand, I will communicate with my parents more frequently, to acquire support. Maybe, after understanding my stress, they will render more help to me.

9In short, currently, I do face some troubles. However, 10I am fully convinced that I will be able to handle them properly and make progress day by day. (Words: 228)

內容分析

虹口區本次一模作文題目,探討學生的煩惱以及解決措施,命題貼近學生的學習和生活。學生看到這個作文題,一般都會有很多想法。