我們的學生於本周一下午進行了期末英語考試，今天我在做試卷質量分析。翻著六（3）班一張張的卷子作統計時，一篇作文引起了我的注意，於是細看一下，發現寫得不錯。（因為我班的考試卷不是我批改，所以此時我才有所觸動。）現展示如下：
my favourite city is beijing. beijing is the capital of china. and it is a good place to visit.
the great wall is another exciting place in beijing. many people go to beijing to visit the great wall and eat famous roast duck. quanjude is a famous restaurant in beijing. its roast duck is the best in beijing. have you been there? beijing also has more museums than any other cities in china. some children like to go to beijing because they can go to a lot of different museums and see different shows.
beijing is my favourite city