My family
There are five people in my family. They are my grandpa, grandma, my father, my mother and I. My grandparents(祖父母)are very old. They enjoy walking in the park.(他們喜歡在公園散步;你可以改成喜歡乾別的事，但enjoy 後要加動詞ing形式,表示喜歡做什麼,如小孩們喜歡讀故事Children enjoy reading stories.)My father is a driver(司機，你隨便改職業). He is very busy (忙綠的). He is good at driving and playing football. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She likes reading books. I’m a student. I’m tall and strong. I’m interested in drawing pictures.(我愛好畫畫，可以改別的愛好，但是要用ing形式，如swimming, dancing)I have a happy family.
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我的家人
我家有五口人。他們是我的爺爺，奶奶，爸爸，媽媽和我。我的祖父母都很老了。他們喜歡在公園散步。我的爸爸是一個司機，他很忙，他擅長駕駛和踢足球。我媽媽是老師。她在學校工作。她喜歡讀書。我是一個學生。我又高又強壯。我對畫畫感興趣。我有一個幸福的家庭。