My Plan for Summer Vacation
The longing summer vacation is approaching, it is the best part of the school year for me. I cannot let the holidays elapse (逝去) meaninglessly, my vacation should be a phase (時期、階段) of harvest. The events in my plan should give me a sense of infinite potential.
The following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. In the first few days I want to climb Mount Hua Shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. Then I tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同學). Besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, I will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.
In short, I want to do interesting things in the summer vacation. Whatever I do, the goal is the same: to get necessary experience, acquire knowledge and broaden my horizons. Though the six week vacation will pass away at lightning speed, its influence is bound to last long.
核心剖析本文作者長句、短句交替使用。文中長句顯得容量大，表達了較為複雜完整、嚴密充實的思想內容。句子開頭方式有：“In the first few days”等介詞短語作狀語開句、“Whatever l do"等讓步狀語從句等句型開句。此外，句子主語除了代詞I和it，還使用了多個名詞，從而避免了從頭到尾一“I”到底。在篇章中通過變化句子長度、句子開頭，傘文表達錯落有致，語言形式豐富多彩。