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dear editor,
i'm a student in senior three. we have made a survey--"who do you turn to when in trouble?" here are the results.
most of the students will go to their classroom or friends when in trouble they're almost of the same age, so they can talk with and understand each other easily. some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troupes and ask for their help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. they can be trusted by these students. only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. they hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others. they have few friends.
in my opinion, when in trouble we’d better ask our teachers, parent, friends or classmates for help.
yours,
li hua