6.避免重複使用某一單詞或短語。如:
〔原文〕i like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕i like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
i like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、 結尾
1、 all in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……（比如說到和諧社會 all in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.）
2、 therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、 as a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.（我們必須採取一些有效的措施來做些什麼）
4、 from what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
四、 一些用法
1、 陳述個人的觀點
it is alleged that(據說)
in my view, both sides are partly right(兩方面都部分的正確)
as far as i am concerned(就我而言)
as regards to me
my own point of view is that……
personally, i believe that……
my experience tells me that……
the invention of the handset, i dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.
the application of web sites, i dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.
it comes as no surprise that chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.
2、 陳述別人的觀點
other individuals, however, take the attitude that……
（錯誤的觀點）sb is under the false belief that……
3、 圖表作文
the table shows\indicates\ reveals that ……（表明、暗示、揭示）
according to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy see\found……（根據表中的數據，我們可以看見，發現）
as seen from the chart/ as is portrayed in the picture
sales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降)
sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)
a brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent.
五、好的替代
the machine\the device 代替 computer
handset代替 cell phone
*the middle kingdom代替 china
intensely\crucially important代替 very important (it is crucially important that the benefits of collective be on our priority.)
approaches代替 ways
current(currently) 代替 now
growing individuals代替 more and more people
individuals/ characters/ folks 代替 people, persons
positive, favorable, rosy(美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, 代替 good
unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 代替 bad