我們都想自己的四級英語作文能獲得高分，提醒你：要想獲得高分就應在“正確”表達的基礎上寫出自己的特色，寫出自己的“亮”點。
在寫作中，我們可按時間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點，同時為使主題突出,結構嚴謹，我們應注意學習和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上，nmet2002範文堪稱典範。請看：
opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. they believe a public park should be free of charge. people need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. what is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
on the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. they suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)該文使用opinions are divided...作交代句，開門見山，隨後兩個段落均使用了主題句(見黑體字部分)，使全文結構緊湊，表達嚴謹。 2)在表述要點時範文還對要點出場順序作了調整，如“40%的同學認為應收門票，但不宜過高。”前部分作為主題句放在句首，而後部分另起一句放在句末：they suggested, however, fees should be charged low.這樣就分清了輕重緩急，主題突出，條理清楚。 3)範文使用了and, what is more, however等連詞，在段落之間使用了on the other hand(說明前後兩個觀點是相悖的)，這些連線手段的運用加強了句子之間、段落之間的聯繫，使文章表達連貫，渾然一體。 4)範文在第二段為說明不收門票的“原因”時增加了charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等細節，這也是解決句與句之間缺少連貫性的常見方法。
總之，要想使自己的文章有亮點，吸引讀者，在考試中獲得高分，就應在用詞、造句、謀篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一處特長都是“亮”點，都是值得肯定的。