i plan to go to taiwan for my summer vacation. taiwan is an island in the eastern china. the weather there is nearly the same as that in fuzhou, sometimes very hot in summer. but i can taste all kinds of delicious fruits. there are also many places of interests. taiwan is famous for mount ali and riyuetan. i won’t miss the hot spring there. i will go swimming in the hot spring.
it’s really interesting. i can’t wait!
批 改 老 師lanboss評分97分級別優秀評語
1. taiwan is an island in the eastern china. 改為taiwan is an island in eastern china.
2.作者對祖國寶島台灣充滿嚮往，語法正確，意思連貫。