i love my family
i have a happy family. there are three people in my family. my english name is jack. i am nine years old this year. i'm in grade four. i like to play the piano and play chess. my mother’s english name is lila，she like to write blog and listen to music. she is an editor. my mother is very thin. my father’s english name is alma，he likes play basketball. he is a manager. my father is a little fat. i also like my cousin and cousin. my cousin’s english name is alice，she likes dolls and yarn skirt. she is eight years old this year. my cousin’s english name is tom，he like play table tennis. i love my happy family.
我愛我家
我有一個幸福的家。在我家裡有三口人。我的英文名字叫傑克，今年九歲了。我上四年級。我喜歡彈鋼琴和下圍棋。我媽媽的英文名字叫莉拉，她喜歡寫部落格和聽音樂。她是一名編輯。我的媽媽非常瘦。我爸爸的英文名字叫奧瑪，他喜歡打籃球。他是一名管理者。我的爸爸有點胖。我還喜歡我的堂妹和表哥。我堂妹的英文名字叫愛麗絲，她喜歡洋娃娃和紗裙。她今年8歲。我表哥的英文名字叫湯姆，他喜歡打桌球。我愛我幸福的家！
【自評】
我的第一篇英語小短文，寫得較簡單，也不知對不對？歡迎大家指導，謝謝！