dear students:
we decide to have a trip . i think this trip can get students feel happy.
teachers want to go to jiangjun mountain. here’s some things about it. before you take a trip, get your food and drinks ready. we will start at 8:00am on march 12th. have you packed yet? it’s the most exciting to the trip. if you pack, well, i hope you join us. i believe you will have a good fun.
school office.
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1. i think this trip can get students feel happy. 改為i think this trip can make students happy.
2. here’s some things about it. 改為 here’re some things about it.
3. it’s the most exciting to the trip. 改為it’s the most exciting to take a trip.
4. i believe you will have a good fun. 改為i believe you will have fun.
5. 內容雖不是很豐富，意思基本完整！ 加油！