my favorite is hainan special zone news, because i’m local citizen in haikou.
basically, i read it every night when i go back home. frankly speaking, nowadays, the development of society and economy is very fast so that i must know the latest information, such us, the new local policy, economic problem and foreign special events. however, my best like content is sports and special focus column. as soon as i take the newspaper, i will find out that content to look carefully. because i like do diverse sports in my spare time. especially, i prefer to know lots of football news, for i’m an amateur football player. on the other hand, i’m fond of look the special focus column in order to know various hainan’s problem and how to deal with it.
i love my hometown. no matter what happen any big problem, i will always support our local media to report it. in addition, i will pay more attention to look that paper, because i’m local citizen.
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my favorite newspaper is hainan special zone news, because i’m local citizen in haikou.
basically, i read it every night when i go back home. frankly speaking, nowadays, the development of society and economy is very fast so that i must know the latest information, such us, the new local policy, economic problem and foreign special events. however, my best like content is sports and special focus column. as soon as i take the newspaper, i will find out that content to look carefully. because i like do diverse sports in my spare time. especially, i prefer to know lots of football news, for i’m an amateur football player. on the other hand, i’m fond of look the special focus column in order to know various hainan’s problem and how to deal with it.
i love my hometown. no matter what happen any big problem, i will always support our local media to report it. in addition, i will pay more attention to look that paper, because i’m local citizen.
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