中考英語作文面面觀--看圖作文

最近幾年的中考英語當中,很多省市已經擺脫了單一作文模式,採用一大一小兩個作文相結合的模式。例如,去年遼寧瀋陽中考英語作文就是一個小作文,套用文-寫假條,加上一個大作文,漢語提示作文構成。今年,北京中考英語作文也將是兩個,一個看圖作文在加上一個提示作文構成。這一講,我們先來學習一下看圖作文的寫法。

看圖作文要求考生按照所給圖畫,通過合理的聯想將一組畫面的內容正確地表達出來。看圖作文與其他類型作文的不同之處在於,它除了要求考生有英語語言表達能力,還要求考生有觀察能力、分析能力和想像能力。

寫好看圖作文應注意的事項1、結合文字提示,正確理解圖意。一般情況下,看圖作文在提供圖畫的同時也附帶有簡要的文字提示,我們可以利用文字提示去正確地理解圖意,得到要點。切忌孤立地看圖而忽視文字提示。

寫作從圖畫的細節出發。所謂細節,就是指圖畫中的人物、事件、地點、環境、時間、動作等。依據圖畫細節,就可以把圖畫的內容用英語具體而生動地表達出來了。

(三)例題分析(例題)

同學們,看到下面的四幅圖片及相應的報導後,你感到最擔憂的是哪兩種情形?請簡述你擔憂的理由並提出建議或希望。

要求:

⒈ 從所給素材中任選兩種情形進行闡述,不可多選或少選。

⒉ 條理清楚,意思連貫,語句通順,標點正確;

⒊ 詞數 80 ~ 100。

參考辭彙: 建議 suggest v. suggestion n.

氣體 gas n.  污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

這道看圖作文題,主題和圖片連線得不是很緊密。從考查的形式上來說,雖是看圖,實質上卻屬於提示性的作文。這個作文應該結合個人的觀點,選擇的餘地還是很大的。做這個題應該注意幾個方面:

1、認真讀題。注意,題目雖然給了四幅圖,但是卻只要求寫其中的兩個就行。

2、題意要求的是闡述個人的觀點-最擔憂的兩種情形。而不是對圖片進行描述。

3、結合所給的提示。提示中,對每種污染都進行了闡述,考生可以這些描述進行寫作。

4、注意字數,語法,拼寫等,避免錯誤。

下面是兩個例文,大家可以參考一下。

One possible version:

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can't live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We'd better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

Another possible version:

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can't sleep well if there is too much noise. That's why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn't make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn't allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can't make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

下面,我們來看看這道題的評分標準。一般來說,各地的評分標準都和下面的這個標準差不多。這個最高的標準,實際上也就是我們寫作的目標。

評分標準:

1. 內容完整,語句流暢,無語法錯誤,書寫規範,給9-10分;

2. 內容較完整,語句較流暢,基本無語法錯誤,書寫較規範,給6-8分;

3. 內容不完整,語句欠流暢,語法錯誤較多,書寫較規範,給3-5分;

4. 只寫出個別要點,語法錯誤較多,書寫欠規範,只有個別句子可讀或不知所云,給0-2分。

看圖作文不可小視。希望大家掌握答好這種題型的要點,並積累辭彙。