(2) clinical efficacy of albendazole emulsion in treatment of 212 cases of liver cystic hydatidosis屬於effect of y on x in z格式。
(3) effect of delivery mode on the interruption of maternal-infant transmission of hepatitis b virus by immunoprophylaxis在文題中註明研究方法的例子。
(4) percutaneous estrogen in prevention of early post menopausal bone loss in chinese women改為effect and optimal dosage of percutaneous estrogen in prevention of early post menopausal bone loss in chinese women更準確。
(5) efficacy and safety of therapeutic angiogenesis from direct myocardial administration of an adadenoviral vector expressing vascular endothelial growth factor 165改為efficacy and safety of an adadenoviral vector expressing vascular endothelial growth factor 165 on angiogenesis by myocardial injection in swine.“injection”比“administration”更準確刪除direct並不影響對文題的理解應當註明實驗動物否則會讓人誤以為是臨床實驗。
(6) nuclear factor κb in signal conduction of protein kinase c in t lymphocytes from asthmatic guinea pig model.在文題前加role of 更準確些。
(7) renal cell carcinoma related novel gene gylz-rcc18: gylz-rcc18: cloning and functional studies改為cloning and functions of renal cell carcinoma related novel gene gylz-rcc18:gylz-rcc18 from patients. cloning and functions是中心詞所以要前置;因患者屬於特殊人群所以應註明