fortunately, as a senior, i began by conducting an internship in the architecture company in zhejiang province. over six months, i worked as an assistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the different departments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadened my perspective of management conditions and business performance in different industries. the experience showed me that management is much more important than that of i thought in big companies. after graduation, i continued my work in this company. in may, XX, the company offered me an opportunity to participate in an training program held by a famous management school. through in-depth discussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me to pursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual ability and the brand new ideas i mentioned.
during the short period of training, i realized that pursuing a higher degree in management is a wise choice for me now. lancaster, with its excellence in management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. in your challenging environment, i can build the required foundation of knowledge related to management to achieve my goals. i am firmly convinced that your admission will be my first step of success. with this in mind, i hereby submit my application, and await your favorable reply.
as a child i often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. when i was older, i sometimes set up displays, waited on customers, and even balanced the books. this experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday, yet i understand that the business world today is more complex. this complexity requires more education, and with that in mind, i am applying to the master’s of business administration program at indiana university bloomington (iub).
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in addition to my helping out in my father’s business, i have had numerous other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program. my resume enumerates the various positions i have held at kerasotes theaters, chili’s restaurants, and indiana university’s new student recreational sports center (srsc), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on serving the public effectively. further, as an assistant manager at the showplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the srsc, i have gained valuable expertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. both of these positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which are extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.