講述自己的相關經歷。但是感覺在談及經歷時候不夠具體，應該說明具體做了什麼事情，從中得到什麼經驗或者教訓。
not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee. part of my volunteering experience at middleway house, the local battered women’s shelter, involved extensive work on computers, including word processing, organizing databases and creating spreadsheets. also, i recently participated in an internship program for academic credit with the eli lilly corporation in the personnel division. as a management intern, i was able to watch the workings of a major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine my experiences with the theoretical background available in the mba program at iub, with its emphasis on computers, marketing and human resources.
志願者活動同樣值得在ps中講述。
my successful internship is one element of my overall academic success as an undergraduate here at iub, yet i have also made time for a variety of extracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing in intramural basketball. my positive experiences here have resulted in my desire to stay in bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore, continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts, with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in the midwest.