直抒胸臆:我最喜歡的顏色-My Favorite Colour
我最喜歡的顏色
【內容提示】
每個人都有自己所喜歡的顏色。你喜歡什麼呢?白的,紅的,黃的,藍的,也或許是紫的。你喜歡某種顏色肯定有你自己的理由,而且見到這種顏色則愛不釋手,依依不捨,甚至凡是你穿的、戴的、用的都可能是這種顏色。請你寫一篇文章抒發你對某種顏色喜愛之情。
【作文示範】
My Favorite Colour
Of all the colours, I like blue best.
Blue is a nice-looking colour. How do you feel when you wake up to find a grey sky? Depressing①, I'm afraid. But when the sky is blue, you feel joyous②, I'm sure.
Blue is the colour of seas, rivers and lakes on a sunny day. I like swimming. Every time I swim I have a good time.
I like blue. So you can see that my pen, ball-pen③,pencil-box and so on are all blue.
I like blue, and many things of ours at school are blue, too. Look, our bags, quilts are blue, and so are our school suits. Even the words on our school envelopes and writing paper are printed in blue. Oh, I like blue very much, and I like our international school more.
(選自《英語畫刊》高中版1996年第11期)
【詞語解釋】
①depressing [di'presiR] a.壓抑的;沉悶的
②joyous ['j&i s] a.喜氣洋洋的;高興的
③ball-pen ['b&:l pen] n.原子筆
【寫法指要】
作者直接抒發對藍色的偏愛。第一句單獨構成一段,簡捷明快地說出自己最愛的是藍色。然後,作者由遠及近,由上而下抒發自已對藍色的喜愛之情:先寫天空的藍色,再寫大海河湖的藍色,又寫自己用具的藍色,最後寫學校物品的藍色,這樣,作者把自己對藍色的熱愛之情寄托在了各個方面。
直抒胸臆:我最喜歡的顏色-My Favorite Colour