（一）
the man in the picture
look at the picture! there is an old man in the picture. his head is bald. look at his eyes, they are fishlike, (應加上連詞and) they are so big. i think his nose is high-bridged, but it is not hooked. his face is very flabby. and he has a big mouth. it’s not full. he wears a white t-shirt, (應加上and) he wears conservative (套用副詞conservatively). his ears look very small, because his face is very long and big. he wears a clean white t-shirt.
i think the man is very ugly. how about you?
(二)
my favorite star
my favorite star is zhang jie. he has got a round face and he is thin. he has curly hair and fringes. his hair is chestnut and his eyes are small. his eyelid(應是eyelids) are doubled and his eyelashes are long. he has got a great high nose bridge. i like his teeth because they’re even. his back is straight and he is tall. he is very handsome and gorgeous. his dress is fashionable.
(三)
my classmate
she is my classmate. her name is xu bingyu. her face is round and dimpled. her hair style is (應加上a) ponytail, and her hair is jet-black. she has two big and watery eyes and long eyelashes. she also has a high-bridged (加上nose) and two small ears. her mouth is generous, and her teeth are even. she has a round chin and a bull neck. her back is stiff. she is kind of short but really cute and pretty. her dress is tidy and fashionable, and she usually wears a black blouse. her smile is sunny.
we are good friends.
(四)
myself
i have a round face. and when i watch (應是look in) the mirror, i can see a pallid face. i am well-featured but i have some pimple (pimples). i don’t have any dimple (dimples).
my haircut is a crew cut. sometimes it’s center parting and sometimes it’s side parting. and my hair is jet-black. i have two big eyes, and they are close-set. and i have double eyelids. and i even have long eyelashs (應是eyelashes).
my nose is pointed. i have a pair of beautiful ears, and i have a big mouth, so sometimes i am very big mouth (應為sometimes i am a very big mouth). my teeth are even (maybe, it’s just i think), and the color are blonde. my chin is round, and my neck is a little long. my belly is flat because i am too thin though i eat a lot of things (food更好) every day. my back is a little bended. i am of medium height and i am very thin. my classmates say that i am very cute but i don’t think so.
my dress is tidy and well-featured, but (沒有轉折關係，用and更好) sometimes it’s very fashionable!
（五）
my favorite star
akiyama mio is my favorite star. she is slim. her hair is long and straight. sometimes her hair style is (加上a) bun. her eyes are watery. she has long eyelashes. her nose is pointed. her smile is happy. she has a slender neck. but usually her dress is conservative, because mio is a shy girl. even though, many people shout at her that (應該為many people call her) “miss akiyama”. her legs are slender. but i still think she is very gorgeous.
(六)
my classmate
oh, do you think this boy is really ill-looking? he is my classmate in school. his name is dai shunxin. do you think his face just likes a piece of square and white paper? he looks very poor. his hair is matted and brown. he has a crew cut. his eyes aren’t watery at all, and they’re fishlike. his nose is also ill-looking, and it’s a hooked nose. he has jagged teeth and his teeth aren’t very clean. he is bended, so he looks very short. he is ugly but he usually has a sunny smile. though he is really ill-looking and everybody usually laughs at him, he studies very hard!
(七)
my favorite person
she is very gorgeous everywhere. she has a dimpled face. it’s very lovely, well-featured. and her hair style is curly, it’s short and kind of chestnut. her eyes are dewy. her nose is short but beautiful. her mouth is full, and there are even teeth. her back is stiff, so she looks like a (加上number)“threee”. she has a slim figure, so she is good-looking. her height is long (身高應為tall) but not too tall. she always wears a tidy dress, and her smile is friendly. she is my favorite person—baubuzhen lin.
（八）
my best friend
she is my best friend, called wang linyutong. her face is thin, and big featured. and she always has dimple (應為dimples) when she smiles. her hair style is short and straight. and she has fringes. her hair is jet-black. her eyes are watery. she has a small mouth. her teeth are capped. she looks like (去掉like) pretty. she always wears well-dressed (she is always well-dressed). she is so beautiful. she is my best friend, wang linyutong.
do you like her?